Aryk's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[JWC: failed contest entry]

Pretty funny

Even though the animation wasn't that great, I liked it. How you narrated it was good.

Other than the animation, the only thing that was wrong was the play button. Something is wrong with it, so you might want to fix that.

Good job.

Kyaztro responds:

Yah sorry, the play button tends to explode when you touch it

[Bones]

HAH

It was animated very well, and it had a nice story too. too bad they didn't live happily ever after. It was a little sad ending. I like the style as well.

Great job.

[School 13 - H.S. - Saw 2]

Sweet!

It's just as good as your last movie. It's a good parody also. The animation was good and so was the drawing.

You can't read some of the subtitles because they are cut off though.

Great job.

Nightwayfarer responds:

oh man... i forgot that i already had this problem with subs...
il try to fix it

[Metal Gear Stick]

Unifinshed?

If it is unfinished, why did you submit it. You should finish it first. The frame rate is to slow, so the movie is extremely slow. There is no sound, which is pretty crucial to having a good movie.

You should improve it a lot and maybe resubmit it.

[EW: Matt Sucks]

HA!

It had some good humour, and the graphics were pretty good. He should of kept the bunny costume, it would have been funnier.

Just spend more time on drawing and it will be great.

Good job.

[Edd Egg - Saw]

Pretty good.

I liked most of the graphics except for the characters. Edd wasn't drawn that well, and he had a strange mouth. I'm sure you could draw better characters because you drew everything else fine.

Other than that, it was interesting and kept my attention. It was a good Saw parody and good joke.

Good job.

[Tywo At Large Ep. #3]

Very good.

The graphics and animation were pretty good. I don't really like the style, but everyone has their own opinion on that. It has a good plot also.

One thing you should work on is walking cycles. Some of yours looked a little awkward. Another thing is the sound effects, some of the walking sounds were out of sync.

Overall, you did a great job and it kept me interested. The walking cycle and sounds aren't that big of a deal.

5/5

Pixmintro responds:

Thank you, next time I'm gonna try using FBF for their walk cycles, this was just an experiment I never got around to fixing. :)

[Fallen Angel Ep. 1 (Pt3)]

Pretty nice end

I was thinking that she lived when the surfboard went through her window, and she did. She recovered from that and the explosion pretty quick.

The animation and graphics were great anyway like the other parts.

I think the movie ended too quickly though. But oh well, good job.

[DE_dust2]

Awesome

Very interesting and funny. The different point of views were good too. I thought the Dumbass was going to win for some reason.

Good job.

[Mastermind]

Haha

The humor is pretty good and I like the dark red theme. I like how his henchmen are smarter than him.

Good job.